Motivational StatementMy name is Jing Li and I am writing to convince this recruiting committee that I am the right choice for enlistment in the United States Navy to serve in the position of War Officer of surface. In the last few years [+of high school], I have spent most of my time pushing myself more and more to be not only competent among my relatives, but also to be competent personally. I have always believed that serving a higher cause than my own is a noble ideal to achieve and have always tried to live in accordance with that belief. That's why when I heard about the opportunity to serve in the prestigious U.S. institution, I was immediately convinced that the opportunity I had always waited for, the chance to make positive change through service to others, was within reach. I am convinced that you cannot achieve positive change without taking initiative and having confidence in your ability to do so. I am therefore confident in my ability to derive something exceptional from my enrollment in your esteemed program. I am convinced that this position will help me in my personal development journey as it projects the same values I hold dear. These are the values of honor, courage and commitment (US Navy). I would therefore consider it a great honor to serve among other believers of these same values. I also strive to demonstrate courage when my country needs it and to remain committed to the cause of protecting the citizens of this nation by fulfilling my duty as a surface warfare officer. Say no to plagiarism. Get a tailor-made essay on "Why Violent Video Games Shouldn't Be Banned"? Get an Original Essay I recently graduated from SUNY Maritime College, where I earned Distinction with Honors in the Mechanical Engineering major. My experience within the maritime college was a great motivation for me in trying to achieve the best I could have academically as I am aware that the US Navy only welcomes the best. With the goal of service in mind, I have acquired knowledge and skills related to maritime service. Although I claim expertise in technical fields such as heat transfer, engineering graphics, programming, thermodynamics, statistical analysis, materials science, electrical circuits, vibration, fluid mechanics, statics, dynamics, marine engineering design, applied naval architecture, technical writing , speech, Mechanical Engineering, Design and Economics, I believe the opportunity to serve within your ranks will provide the chance to hone these skills and gain even more invaluable skills from the men and women who have dedicated their lives to utilizing their talents to defend this nation. I aspire to one day serve in their ranks and therefore implore your consideration. I demonstrated resilience and determination throughout my course at SUNY Maritime School, achieving challenging academic goals even when the odds seemed against me. Being an undeclared student with a penchant for the arts, my parents, peers and even academic advisors discouraged me from pursuing engineering. Once upon a time, an academic advisor even verbally berated me, claiming that I couldn't make it as an engineer. My classmates at the beginning of the course pointed out that I didn't look like an engineering student. However, these provocations only strengthened my determination to succeed. I promised to prove to myself and to them that being a woman would not prevent me from heeding my calling as an engineer..
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